To succeed in business, one needs to know math. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
Many people regard math skills as a key factor to achieve success in business as it facilitates
the decision making process. However, I believe it is only one out of various factors that
contribute to business success and therefore non-essential.
(P)On the one hand, math enables key people to make better decisions. (Ex)One application of
business mathematics is to provide statistics that can predict future scenarios. These
predictions might lay a firm foundation for more informed and evidence-based decisions,
replacing biased ones based on managers’ gut feelings. (Eg)For decades, Unilever has utilised
a statistical model that can forecast the supply and demand of fast-moving consumer goods,
(R)allowing the company leaders to promptly plan production and sales of each product
category.
(P)On the other hand, I believe that one can run a business successfully without excellent math
skills. (Ex)In fact, many entrepreneurs have built billion-dollar enterprises thanks to great
personal qualities. (Eg)A good example in this case is Nguyen Thanh Duc, the chairman of
NTD Group. He was known to be a disruptive student that failed almost all school subjects
including math, yet he rose to become an inspirational leader who could motivate his
employees to strive to gain collective success for the corporation. In addition, his success is
attributed to the courage to take the risks that rational calculations, such as those that guide
Unilever, would rule out. (R)As these leadership qualities concurred with a good fortune, his
startup has evolved into a multinational business empire, becoming market leaders in many
industries including real estate, fishery and forestry.
In conclusion, although statistical math could help make better decisions, I am of the opinion
that risk taking, inspirational personality traits and luck are crucial to drive an enterprise to
success. That is why business schools should focus more on honoring interpersonal skills
including leadership and communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68524590164 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09203795852 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662295081967 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1165929722 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11902131059 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044719981852 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416319645978 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0316096134543 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391927191 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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