Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?
success cannot be measure in terms of financial holdings. it is a possession of being inspirable for others and it can be said that it is a combination of good personal as well as professional life of a person.there are lot of examples exist in the world that all successful personalities are not rich in terms of money and other valuables .
I totally oppose the view that it can be described in terms of money even there are better ways to explain it,like success for a person is having a good personal relationships with his family, friends and society and well paid job which runs one's expanses easily.also, it can be expressed as how much a person influenced others in his life for example, dr.apj abdul kalam,a former president of india and a scientist never owned a luxury car or a huge house but his words has great impact on his nation's youth. he is known as a successful person just because of his deeds towards betterment of his nation.
there are some another ways by which success can be explained as dedication and hardwork.one can has successful life with these two for example thomas edison has failed 1000 times but his dedication and hard work made him successful in the invention of light bulb.he was not wealthy but his invention make him successful person.
to sum up, success never be expressed in materialistic way but good works can be taken as success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7037037037 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75095876375 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.869031421 49.4020404114 328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.5 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221775950656 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149026409922 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548337689947 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161272520744 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406253521817 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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