Success is something that many people try to achieve. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?
Humans are unique creatures in the world in that they always strive for achieving their own success. They find it difficult to define the meaning of success on the ground that it has different meaning to different people. From my perspective, humans must feel that success is not only the result but also the process due to precious experience .
People derive from divergent circumstances, so success is not only intangible but also tangible assets. This means that the shape and meaning of success depends on the expectation of people. For example, a guy living in poverty owns his success to be rich or a lady living in a broken family may build up a home sweet home for her children is a dream. Therefore, it is really hard to correctly define the meaning of success in that life is such a colored world that people are not able to have a deeper insight into this.
However, we have our own divergent points of view of success, so do i. I always reckon the meaning of success is a process that makes us feel happy and satisfied. This is to say that they must indulge themselves into the process to achieve success. For example, people build their own family whose ultimate goal in their life, so they have a chance of enjoying the process from the beginning to the end. To be specific, they should enjoy dating their lover, getting a proposal from him or her, having marriage, and giving birth. These results are not only precious memories but also priceless feelings of success. Above all, the indulging process needs to be taken into account because of its precious experience.
In conclusion, the essence of success is the feeling of people and it does not matter that its result or process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69666666667 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46557741207 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8117260079 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.9333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302633626526 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123114663333 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695215763441 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214413137106 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349036776177 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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