Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary life, with the rise in globalization, the competition between the modern and the culture is harder and harder. Many a person reckons that thanks to the growth and quick expansion of supermarkets in some nations leads to the doom of small local businesses. From my perspective, the small local businesses get a chance to develop not only their products but also their performance and they must not squander this chance.
Besides the local markets, the supermarkets are playing a crucial role in distributing the necessary goods for the community. The small local companies absolutely may face more and more difficult situations to compete with their virals. All big companies possess state of the art technology to increase not only their productivity but also the quality of their goods. They find it easy to fulfill the requirements of the supermarkets to sell their products, which the local enterprises cannot meet. Furthermore, customers tend to use the products from big and famous companies instead of the small local businesses’ products. Thus, the small local businesses are not able to compete with big enterprises in their niche market.
To come up with the solution of these hard situations, small local businesses must change their operation and outcoming products. For instance, they are able to ensure the quality of their goods by using and applying the international quality certification such as ISO 9001 for operation, HACCP for food productions, and so forth. All these certifications assist them in spreading their products like wildfire to their potential customers, besides, they can easily fulfill all the standard requirements from any supermarkets. Furthermore, their manufacturers have to be invested to purchase new leading edge machines to increase their efficiency. This means that they totally have an ability to adapt themselves to contribute their goods whenever the need of the market rises. Above all, changing and investing in the small local companies are necessary to give them a hand to go over those situations.
In conclusion, competition and the standard of qualification are a big chance for small local enterprises to develop their products and adapt themselves to the constantly changing of their niche market.
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Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.356545961 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02105799037 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50139275766 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7194334868 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.1875 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194649246045 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845879179275 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745761541611 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14503496067 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664496570302 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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