In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as
completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning
and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this?
Besides the education a technical learning is also necessary.In many countries students involved in kind of paid work;although, many people takes this as unfair.But,other think that it give them work experience and vital for their studies and having responsibility.In this essay we will discuss the some vital importance of working during their studies.
many people argued that education is sole responsibility of parents and they should support their children education.Although,they consider this make students stressed to manage their professional and educational life together.Recent survey shows that children who spend less time on sport are more aggressive and depressed as compare to active students.also teacher said that pupils not doing their home work properly and sleep in the class.In their thinking children become more materialistic away from normal life which other people spend.In japan children are even more intelligent and making improvement in technology ;although the suicidal ratio is highest across the world.
However,in many countries students have been more likely to involved in stipend jobs or internships.In my thinking it's very important for college and university students to doing some work and gaining experience during their studies.Despite this it should not be applicable for school childrens.it assist student in many way they support their studies and experience will come with that which enhance the skills.In European countries international students work at different places like clubs and restaurant to meet their expenses.Now a days the lot graduating from universities have no experience and unable to find a resonibile job as competition is on peak across the world.it also prepare them for practical life to taking responsibility of life and their moral duties. In this essay we discussed the effect of work during studies.As my mind it's should be part of studies schools should arrange a research facilities for students its important for their future and life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6262295082 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22284241767 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.2975951904 374% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 234.348565176 49.4020404114 474% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 429.0 106.682146367 402% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.25 20.7667163134 367% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238815853741 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171737779783 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860150738321 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195488123304 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894007319949 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.2 13.0946893788 330% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.12 50.2224549098 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 11.3001002004 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.56 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.7 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.1190380762 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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