Living in a country where you have to peak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

To some extend social as well as practical problem associated with when nationally you must have to speak foreign language.Social problem like we cannot understand and talk to other in true sense but with repeatedly being used of these language we can come to introduce some other internally known language.In practically all our document and our educational course would have been in other language our own language extincts in just few decades.foreign language which is extremely important should be in general syllabus but speaking should not be must or to have.
although, foreign language causes many more problems as compare to advantages which are related to our social environment but practically are difficult. In Pakistan all course all been converted into English we mostly used Internationally recognize language in our dialylife. We lost our native language word and when we communicate with elder generation we cannot understand and to be understand.All paper work done in English which uneducated people cannot understand which causes little bit of in confidence in people.
Although, in our generation time we take alot of time to teach most word of english but now a days children are using these word on dailybase.A sides from our native languages these generation even know little about their mother toungue.in chine teaching is given in their native language other languages is not used in which they speak,read,think and teach in same language.education having must in other language have no benefit because moving to other country you require ILETS despite of learning in english from chilhood to know.
eventally,to many problem associated to living a country where speaking forigen language is must these effect in term of socially and practically also.native language must be primary language then other internal language which have more problem associated then good effects

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...you must have to speak foreign language.Social problem like we cannot understand and t...
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Message: Did you mean 'this language' or 'these languages'?
Suggestion: this language; these languages
...sense but with repeatedly being used of these language we can come to introduce some other int...
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...ce some other internally known language.In practically all our document and our ed...
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...peaking should not be must or to have. although, foreign language causes many more prob...
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... cannot understand and to be understand.All paper work done in English which uneduc...
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...d people cannot understand which causes little bit of in confidence in people. Although, ...
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... time to teach most word of english but now a days children are using these word on dailyb...
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...ldren are using these word on dailybase.A sides from our native languages these g...
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...ldren are using these word on dailybase.A sides from our native languages these generat...
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...ybase.A sides from our native languages these generation even know little about their mother tou...
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...anguages is not used in which they speak,read,think and teach in same language.educat...
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...ning in english from chilhood to know. eventally,to many problem associated to living a ...
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...nglish from chilhood to know. eventally,to many problem associated to living a cou...
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...sh from chilhood to know. eventally,to many problem associated to living a country where sp...
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Suggestion: as well
...ect in term of socially and practically also.native language must be primary languag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, in general, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39261744966 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9972755372 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.658109194 49.4020404114 352% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.833333333 106.682146367 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.6666666667 20.7667163134 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185737624278 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102043813072 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567596695889 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125757624705 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398368753951 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.8 13.0946893788 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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