taking care children
As you know, children are the future of our world and we have to pay attention to taking care about them. although there a lot of taking care children institute in our society, I believe that there are a lot of ways to do that with their parents instead of using institutes.
In developed countries, couples are obligated to participate in take childcare courses before their marriage. The training courses are the cause of preparation lovely children for their future life. The obtained results show the important role of these courses in children life rather than our country. Indeed, there are many significant things that these courses bring to parents like good experience in face strange behavior of their children.
although these courses are not epidemic in our country, a huge number of parents are not affordable to paying the tuition fee of courses. Most of parents prefer to use traditional method to taking care of children. For instance, they often take care their children based on experience of elder people namely their parents, grandparents and so on while some of their ways definitely are wrong.
To conclude based on my attitude, it is better that parents choosing the best way according their situation but children growing up under their direct supervision is more effective rather than other ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...ay attention to taking care about them. although there a lot of taking care children ins...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...trange behavior of their children. although these courses are not epidemic in our c...
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Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the parents') or simply say ''Most parents''.
Suggestion: Most of the parents; Most parents
...e to paying the tuition fee of courses. Most of parents prefer to use traditional method to tak...
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Line 9, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... care their children based on experience of elder people namely their parents, gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for instance, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10502283105 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58277208051 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579908675799 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8522270394 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373730643988 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175515529524 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13840932952 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243661551891 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136932482052 0.056905535591 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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