talk about your viewpoints and some solutions to nature polution
• Nature has appeared for more than 4.5 billion years, which means 22.500 times longer than us. Suppose that its age is 24 hours of a day, then the human has just existed for about 3 seconds. But look at what we've done in that fleeting 3 seconds. Cutting down the forests, polluting the environment, damaging water streams, killing animals, ... just for our own greed. Meanwhile, nature is the one who gives us life, supplies us with food, accommodation, invaluable resources and several lessons to evolve.. People need nature, but nature doesn’t. We can’t deny that our tomorrow depends on nature. When it thrives, we thrive; when it falters, we falter or even worse. And in the end, what goes around, comes around. All of these natural disasters, impure surroundings that we are suffering are the result that we have to deal with. Like B.F Skinner has said: “The environment will continue to deteriorate until pollution practices are abandoned”. So it’s high time we took action not only to protect our Mother Nature but also save our future life, start from little to huge deeds. Initial, plant more trees because they are the shields to protect us from nature’s anger. Aside from this, we should make sustainable transportation choices. Don’t hesitate to walk, cycle instead of driving your cars for short trips. Also, we should use public vehicles or ask acquaintances to give us for a lift if we have the same way. Moreover, easy but always efficient is that we need to learn to save energy such as water or electricity and the 3 R’s rules. In addition, solar power is another fantastic solution. Now that solar radiation is at a climactic peak, we can reap power from the sun using solar panel systems. Along with it, wind power is coming into play. By building wind turbines to harvest natural wind energy, electricity is produced. Wind turbine power and solar power are both powerful forces against fossil fuel power and radioactive power. To put it in a nutshell, we must now make moves to reduce pollution , save our planet and live for a brighter future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
...d for about 3 seconds. But look at what weve done in that fleeting 3 seconds. Cuttin...
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Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... resources and several lessons to evolve.. People need nature, but nature doesn&ap...
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Line 1, column 852, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: F
...sult that we have to deal with. Like B.F Skinner has said: 'The environment...
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Line 1, column 2058, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... must now make moves to reduce pollution , save our planet and live for a brighter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92134831461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64509211203 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660112359551 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1057010773 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666990073784 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019574289248 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261420295899 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666990073784 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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