Work-life is extremely busy for every person and everyone is only earning for a better life. Masses mere work for their complete their demands, therefore they start the work from adult age. This notion is going to the beneficial side. Thus, I'm going toward the agree side.
There are numerous reasons why these types of people do this. Two major are, make money for their another activity and buy the stuff. To begin with, It is clear that a number of children start work from an early age, consequently that they save for their education and home and consequently on. This thing they make too strong and experience holder. For example, If a pupil does work as well as a study then he will have earned when that student grows up. Moreover, young people earn money to buy their necessary things, like laptops, mobile and books. This habit with they do not beg money from their guardian. That's what a child becomes more excel than others.
Furthermore, In retirement, they do not do concern about money and medicals fees. Firstly, It is true that when a person does work from childhood then they have more work experience and chunky money and consequently on. Due to this factor, they do not worry about money in aged age. Such as, In mature age, a human has not welled service of food and lack family help, then they buy meal service from the market. Secondly, after retirement, old masses feel more health problems. They spend their money on medical treatment so that they live long in overage.
To sum up, Earning money is not a bad thing. If a person prepares money from childhood or after graduation.
- Task 2 The increase in people s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement One alternative is that people start to work at younger age Some people think this is a positive development To what extent do you agree or disa 61
- Task 2 The increase in people s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement One alternative is that people start to work at younger age Some people think this is a positive development To what extent do you agree or disa 61
- Task 2 The increase in people s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement One alternative is that people start to work at younger age Some people think this is a positive development To what extent do you agree or disa 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67957746479 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24364859902 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.432198507 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.45 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268779751001 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802900971792 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592772494812 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154401491681 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963000037736 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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