It is often argued that financing for the spiritual festivals like New Year is so common for authorities in major countries. I completely agree with that statement because celebrating religious holidays is the most crucial priority of people to encourage themselves.
Firstly, it is an indisputable fact that every culture has their own distinctive traditional with inseparable festivals. It means that customs are performed with specific preparations. Unfortinately, we cannot imagine our lifestyle without different types of holidays. And those all require more efforts. Taking Europe as an example, Europeans are festival lovers and they adore each actions which are held in celebratory days even they are involved too much excessive expenses.
Secondly, it is vitally important to note that celebrating holidays is a means of recognition of oneself, - who you are. This can lead to identify the core of one's individuality. For instance, in every parts of the Earth there are various religious celebrations from cradle to the grave, one of them is New year holiday. It is a religious as well as modern festival which is celebrated wordwide. All of these parties need to be invested money.
By way of my conclusion, I reaffirm my position again. Even thought celebrating religious holidays costs to much money, it helps to direct humanity how to live along with it is a main approach to maintain and heritage the beliefs to the future generations. It is often argued that financing for the spiritual festivals like New Year is so common for authorities in major countries. I completely agree with that statement because celebrating religious holidays is the most crucial priority of people to encourage themselves.
Firstly, it is an indisputable fact that every culture has their own distinctive traditional with inseparable festivals. It means that customs are performed with specific preparations. Unfortinately, we cannot imagine our lifestyle without different types of holidays. And those all require more efforts. Taking Europe as an example, Europeans are festival lovers and they adore each actions which are held in celebratory days even they are involved too much excessive expenses.
Secondly, it is vitally important to note that celebrating holidays is a means of recognition of oneself, - who you are. This can lead to identify the core of one's individuality. For instance, in every parts of the Earth there are various religious celebrations from cradle to the grave, one of them is New year holiday. It is a religious as well as modern festival which is celebrated wordwide. All of these parties need to be invested money.
By way of my conclusion, I reaffirm my position again. Even thought celebrating religious holidays costs to much money, it helps to direct humanity how to live along with it is a main approach to maintain and heritage the beliefs to the future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... imagine our lifestyle without different types of holidays. And those all require...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
.... This can lead to identify the core of ones individuality. For instance, in every p...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ht celebrating religious holidays costs to much money, it helps to direct humanity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25751072961 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02913085232 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665236051502 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9061992648 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179339401573 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511115372968 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444681748508 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102179834629 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480993734531 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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