Task 2: Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
It is true that better facilities and services in major cities enable us to lead a healthy life. However, I believe that living in rural regions brings more health benefits than living in urban areas. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and provide reasons for my point of view.
To begin with, in major cities, people are provided with decent healthcare services. There are several hospitals with professional doctors who are able to give accurate diagnoses and the best treatment to patients in cities. On top of that, urban residents are often well-educated about health. This is because children in cities are usually instructed on food nutrition and exercises to improve their fitness at school or even in summer camps.
However, I support the view that there are more health-related benefits of living in rural areas. Firstly, people seldom suffer from air and noise pollution, which is harmful to their mental as well as physical health. Since only a few vehicles are on the streets, it is less likely for traffic congestion to happen at rush hour, also, fewer fumes are emitted. Secondly, the food in the countryside is usually fresher and probably cleaner as rural residents tend to grow vegetables and raise cattle on their own. Therefore, their food is not treated with toxic chemicals such as pesticides, antibiotics, and hormones.
In conclusion, although major cities offer a lot of high-quality healthcare services, I would argue that living in the countryside is more healthy for us both mentally and physically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...is usually fresher and probably cleaner as rural residents tend to grow vegetables...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08984375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69441504533 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0731147705 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211270302515 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662039051311 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600867720673 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128247832626 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661842100715 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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