In recent years, people tend to consume goods like clothes, cars and other items from famous brands. There are a number of reasons for this trend, which is having a significant impact on individuals.
There are two important reasons why more and more people want to buy famous products. Firstly, people want their products to be ensured in terms of quality. The more prevalent brands are, the better their quality is. People suppose that these goods are still being in the competitive market for years as they are trusted by consumers. For example, goods manufactured by Apple are preferable to other gadgets brands, which are less prevalent. Secondly, the possession of these famous products is also a way to show off their wealth, style, and social class as well. If they use ordinary goods, no one will recognize them.
However, this tendency could have negative consequences in terms of benefits for individuals. Some brands might use marketing strategies to manipulate consumers. For example, using digital marketing makes people believe in the quality of products without thoroughly checking. Another negative factor is that consumers will skip other brands despite the fact that they are high-quality goods.
In conclusion, this consumerism is a result of people’s need to have high-quality products and demonstrate on their own. As it deprives consumers of having a look at others, this trend is largely negative.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...others, this trend is largely negative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24017467249 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70964129484 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598253275109 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1011814667 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218218686089 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736901753873 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915751653013 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120435566986 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718059792286 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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