Task 2: Some people argue that growing our own food would be beneficial for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is claimed that planting our own food can bring more benefits not only to people but also to society. In my opinion, I completely agree with this view for several reasons. This essay discusses the reasons why I support this view and explains each reason.
Firstly, it is true that people can save money on groceries. The grocery bill for buying food will shrink as people can manufacture their food at their houses. For instance, individuals completely buy a packet of seeds and then grow them in their gardens or backyards which can save money to buy vegetables in the market or supermarket. In addition, people can use the seeds from the best producers and then dry them to use for the next crops. This not only can save your finances but also can choose the top seeds for next seasons.
Another reason can be taken into consideration is that people stop worrying about food safety. Many people are concerned about food safety in global food marketplaces with the origin of some kinds of food as well as the safe levels of them. To illustrate, some kinds of vegetables such as tomatoes, spinach, or potatoes are often used chemicals to keep them fresh and then the shopkeepers sell them to buyers. Moreover, using dirty vegetables in meals not only does not provide nutrients and even directly affects the health of consumers. Therefore, you don't have to go out to buy food, and instead, you can trust that your food is safe and healthy to eat. Additionally, when people purchase and eat unoriginal food, this can lead to many health problems which can be a burden to family and society.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that producing food by self has more positive effects than its negative such as people can save their finances and they also protect themselves from unknown origin food in food marketplaces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 555, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the health of consumers. Therefore, you dont have to go out to buy food, and instead...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78481012658 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50488227002 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6668749995 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195172360303 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727297713601 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444517393044 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117329925169 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250719678265 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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