Task 2. Today, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this case? How should they be punished?
It is obvious that these days, the crime rate among youngsters and adolescents is dramatically increasing. While this tendency can be attributed to several reasons, different appropriate punishments should be implemented to tackle the problem,
There are two primary factors that can contribute to the rising crime rate among young people. In terms of social evils, nowadays, drug dealers have targeted educational institutions and entertainment centers, which involve the presence of most young people. As a result, drug trafficking has become ubiquitous in many industrialized areas, which develops a negative pattern of behaviors in the youth’s formative years and gradually increases the crime rate. From the commercial perspective, due to the rapid development of social networking sites, young people are likely to be swayed by several types of commercial advertising which involve the introduction of many harmful consumer products. Furthermore, giant corporations tend to focus on teenagers as their target audience to promote their goods. Consequently, they are persuaded to squander their saving on these products despite their inadequate affordability, which makes to turn to commit crime of passion unless they have enough money to purchase their desired goods.
Therefore, imposing several punishments on the young offenders is of paramount importance. One measure would be to put these youngsters on probation. Segregating offenders in a secured environment is one of the effective vindicatory sanctions to reduce the crime rate in the community. Moreover, the full weight of the law should act as a deterrent to attenuate drug trafficking and enhance security in educational institutions. Another potential solution is to combine confinement with education, which includes the provision of apprenticeship schemes and sport facilities to endow these youngsters with a second chance. Such policies are also a promising approach to help them easily make a fresh start after being released back to the community.
In conclusion, although some possible reasons for the growth of the crime rate can be identified, numerous steps can be effectively taken to mitigate the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68085106383 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13757618085 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604863221884 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.844494536 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163949245477 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493601726634 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411009973235 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105766974577 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403310044284 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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