Teaching children at home or at school is better ? Discuss both views and give your opinon.
Kids are much dependent on ways of coaching. While a section of people thinks that homeschooling is a solid option, I believe that the formal school eduction is more essential for a child’s overall growth. However, some predominant ideas for both views will also be outlined within this essay.
It is true that homeschooling has serveral clear benefits. The primary one is that people who find it difficult to get along with others, can get to study better at home. Homeschooling helps students to give out good scores in subjects without having any troubles in cooperating with people. Their partners are their parents. Furthermore, parents know their children best. Educating kids on their own will make it easier for them to figure out their children’s strengths and weaknesses. Consequently, some suitable methods will be set out to tackle the problems. This in turn may effectively aid to boost the children’s comprehensive developement.
However, in my opinion, schools have greater conditions in terms of educating our kids. Firstly, teachers are qualified and savvy in their fields, which assures that students will not lack of knowledges. For instance, Math teachers specialize in teaching Mathematics. Students who study them will have deep aspects about the subject, so as to understand it comprehensively. Secondly, cooperation takes a crucial part while working. If our children do not know how to work with others productively, they may not result well in works. Schools facilitate us with a range of group works. This has improved the students’s skills in terms of collaboration, which also grant many following benefits.
Considering above arguments, I have concluded that schools are doing better jobs in educating our kids. I disagree with the idea of teaching children at home is better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, as to, for instance, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37370242215 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10929642924 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615916955017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1459257794 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9523809524 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7619047619 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186631576639 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508665631432 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834460691295 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13275659594 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975525116751 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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