Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion ?
humans have taken great advantages from animals. While a section of people advocates the idea of using them in making a range of products, I would consider this as an unethical action.
On the one hand, it is true that this activity does wonders to us. Firstly, testing products on animals may cause deaths of them yet assure many human’s lives, since the people’s safety should be the first priority. For instance, medicines that have not been experimented thoroughly, could harm innocent patients. this in turn will be more cruel to people compared to the current procedure. secondly, the method costs least whenever it comes to any other experiments. The cheaper of the investments, the larger amount of profits that brands can grant.
On the other hand, in my point of view, this action could also bring about following drawbacks. The first one is to lead to the exstinction of diverse animals. As industries can make enormous amount of money on them, they tend to harm these creatures as many as possible.A good point in this case is Versace used to use rabbits for experimenting cosmetics. As the mortality of the animal increased, they wereaccused of the barbarism, and therefore had to close most of their brand’s stores. secondly, killing innocent animals means putting a strain on our planet. having said that, there are some certain creatures that are crucial to the enviroment. For exmple, whale knows by when a volcanic can erupt. therefore, hunting whales frequently in a purpose of serving humans may cause a wide range of problems.
having consider above arguements, I have conclude that animals should be treated equally as humans even though the benefits they can grant by being experimented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11929824561 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75197346577 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628070175439 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2095665314 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8235294118 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218715552745 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523587998482 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439675015699 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122388224994 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398269620222 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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