There are many different types of music in the world today.
Why do we need music?
Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
It is true that there are a huge of different kinds of music around the globe nowadays. There could be several reasons why music plays an important role in human's life, and I believe that the domestically produced music is more significant in a country than the foreign music.
There are various reasons why we need music as an udispensable part of our life. Firstly, music is a mean of transmission of our feelings and thoughts which we can express love, respect, speech or even inspiration to people throughout the melody and lyrics . Taylor Swift - a resounding American singer, who wrote about a song named "Love Story " after breaking down the passionate love due to the prevention of her family, using words and sounds to express ter poun hopeless and viewpoints of love. Secondly, music help us improve the spiritual problems such as relieving the stress, preventing the depression or even treating mental diseases. Some recent researches show that when listening to favorite songs , our brain will produce a Subtance named Dopamine making us feel happier.
In my view, music produced in our own country is a better choice than International music produced in the foreign countries. Traditional music not only give us much more Knowledge about the history and culture but also Create some opportunities for the development of cheyasiya musical industry. Each song is a story which witter and singer want to show the food, clothes or deed of arms of historical heroes in order that the younger understand much more obviously about the place they are living in.
In conclusion, I believe that music is a necessary need in the spiritual life all around the world, and people listen to music produced in their own country making many benefits for individual and musical industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04362416107 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68943392237 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3281791826 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424344693185 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172818912304 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129992641332 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294289273637 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989320299638 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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