There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? is the traditional music of a country is more important than international music?
A plethora of music genres exists throughout the globe today. The following paragraphs will accentuate the importance of music and shed light on why international music supersedes traditional music based on acquiring knowledge and getting exposure to other cultures also, and will further reach a reasonable conclusion.
Listening to music heals our minds and soul. There is a strong need for music because it freshens up and lightens our mood. Often people prefer listening to songs to escape their mundane or hectic work schedules, and others spend their leisure and recreational time enjoying these songs. Additionally, music may also help us to cope with ailments like depression, stress, anxiety, loneliness, etc. Furthermore, music sets a beautiful aura in festivals and celebrations, and people enjoy it more. Sometimes music aids in ameliorating sleep quality as well. Indeed, the importance and necessity of music are well evident.
Traditional music is a form of local music more prominent to a local community whereas, international music has its roots of origin from a foreign country. In my opinion, international music helps us to explore the forms of culture of another country. Moreover, through foreign songs, we get a chance to apprehend and expand our knowledge about other singers, composers, lyricists, etc., and further analyze the difference in elements like the tune, bass, rhythm, and pitch in comparison to local music. Hence, it can be well comprehended that international songs dominate over traditional songs.
To sum up, music comprises innumerable advantages and plays a crucial role in living a stress-free life, enjoying, healing minor mental illnesses, and improving sleep patterns. Also, international music succeeds traditional one as it opens up a gateway to traverse and unveil foreign music styles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51056338028 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99211048488 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3756337617 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495416247506 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180003972675 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960142884674 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313476237913 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490198508982 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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