There are many different types of music in the world today.
Why do we need
music?
Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
These days, music of different kinds is becoming increasingly popular. This essay will discuss some of the benefits music brings, and why I believe local music is far better then foreign songs.
There are several advantages music offer. Firstly, it helps to soothe the mind. People go through a lot of terrible things in life, as a result, they become anxious and depressed most of the times. However, when music is listened to at such times, it calms the nerve and reduces stress. Because of this, music is now being used therapeutically to calm mentally unstable patients in psychiatry centres. Secondly, it serves as a means of communication among people. The lyrics and sound tracks of songs carry messages which can be easily understood by the listener. Lovers, for example, share their emotion between each other using romantic songs. In addition, music can be a tool used for preaching peace among nations at war. A vivid example is the 'Earth Song' by Michael Jackson, sang to address the destruction of lives and properties.
Traditional music has a lot of merits over international songs. To begin with, they can be easily understood by the Locals. Local songs are tailored to be in line with the social and cultural way of life of the people, therefore, they find it so easy to comprehend the message it carries. For instance, most of these songs are sang in their own native dialect, thus, it eliminates any form of difficulty in comprehending. Moreover, since these songs are in accordance with the exact condition of the people, they meet their needs more specifically then international songs.
In conclusion, although music is now very popular, I believe local songs are more beneficial to the citizens of a country then foreign songs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98979591837 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72430294823 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5786823163 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183849065385 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633887939326 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729477011057 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13694701008 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658148796705 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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