There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is the major topic of concern in current society. The music has diversity styles and can be found around the world. Music is important to human cultures for many reasons. I personally believe that the
traditional music is much more critical than international music.
Music provide enjoyment and relaxation after a busy day. People listen to music to relax at home and to dance in a big festival. Not only this, music is also good for memory. People could remember a lyrics of bunch of songs much better than an article that they recently read. In many countries, they started using musical medicine in order to help elderly people recall things of their past, which they could not recollection without listening music. In addition, music potential to take people from the beta brainwave state to deeper alpha that make them to be more focus on their assignment.
From my personal perspective, orginal music is more significant than international music. Listening to music every day, people can know more about their country cultures and religious and then preserve it. Vietnam, for example, has lots of traditionall kinds of music such as “cheo”, “vi dam”and “ho” connect people to the past because it express their traditions and history.
In conlusion, music is an essential part of our life and I blelieve that tradition music is more important than internation music and it should be preserved as a part of a country’s culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08713692946 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67212185141 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597510373444 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2538717011 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5714285714 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489617235319 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20527841516 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114644546683 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360336263407 0.151304729494 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858191983242 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.