It is widely known that Money basically the backbone of modern human civilazation. There are plenthora of things that motivate people to work. However, Undoubtedly, The main motive is money, Because pupils wants to fulfill their daily needs. This essay will illustrate money's potential power.
Money control people's mind. Its increasingly common to know that whom possess money possess people. One of the most obvious example of this is corruption. Especially, Third world countries goverment are the source of corrupted individuals, (e,g indonesia, India , etc). Its commonly caused by the lack of surveillance from the supervisor or the govermental tools who thinks that their salary are no longer sufficient to sustain their lifestyle. Moreover, many believed that money can buy joy. Consequently, Those who trust on this notion will spend their entire life chasing money, and at their pension age, they finally realize that their hardwork are in vain, because they can not enjoy their own sweat. Unfortunately, Most of the regrets will come at the late moment. A study conducted by world suicide prevention cited that 60% of suicidal case are involving money. By this statement alone we can conclude that Money wield power to determine a life of a human.Therefore, We must not depend for money exaggeratedly.
In addition, Money as the perpetual machine of economy. The global economy of the world are based on it. Because it's versatility, World finance used it for every modern transaction that occur. It's categorization also has diverse in its on way, From dollar to rupiahs . from giving wage to a employee to global trade connection, it all based on a single system, Money. Therefore it is unquestionably the most vital equilibrium that we still count on from ancient egypt time till today. Without it, Humankind will suffer because the world economy will blocked by confusion from what currency that they should use.
In conclusion, Although money influence the entire population of human, It also has several detrimental effects on human mental health. Despite aforementioned statement, I should agree that money bring enormous role of human overall survival and happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, third, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29597701149 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83305416792 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0130587255 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1304347826 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1304347826 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65217391304 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239883098474 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076447353348 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062762737285 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154791382837 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856776848686 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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