There are many things that motivate a person to work, but money is the most compelling. In your opinion, how influential is the power of money?
There are many things that motivate a person to work, but money is the most compelling, in today's generation most of individuals work for money but at the end of the day the individual who loved his or her profession prevailed and became successful much of the time. Today's teenagers choice of choosing profession are usually lured by salary of the job rather than selecting the profession in which they personally have interest.
Though most of them lured away by the salary , everyone convince himself to be happy as "A fool believing his own lie". By ending up in wrong profession lured by the money, the also steal the opportunity from deserving ones who could perform better than them.
Money plays a crucial role in our lives ,it can make a person do anything for becoming rich. It is also responsible for being selfish in our day to day life .It is the main cause for snatching away the dreams of individual, such as a teenager who wants to become a teacher ,having financial problems in house would obviously go in any other field where he could earn more money
there are many ways to motivate a individual rather than money, such as to work in the field which he likes and make himself satisfy with his job and many more such as making new friends, keeping himself engaged with work rather than sitting home alone.
At last we can say that there are many things that motivate a person to work, but money may not be his most compelling, though interest in work have some drawbacks such as low income ,but there are more pros in working in his own interested profession than tempted by money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62369337979 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41965561889 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.783969043 49.4020404114 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.571428571 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284459651205 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141811407928 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115767628188 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170599886992 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928096083034 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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