There are more advertisements aimed at children. Some people believe that they have negative effects on children and should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
These days children are bombarded with countless of commercial ads given the rise of technology. While many people believe that advertising targeting children should be prohibited since it exerts negative effects on them, I completely oppose with that point of view.
On the one hand, advertisements have detrimental effects on children’s future development and wellbeing. Many fast-food companies blatantly manipulate advertising strategies to entice children to buy their products, since children might have not yet developed concepts of healthy-eating habits and cannot differentiate between unharmful or harmful advertisements. As soon as kids catch fast-food products on commercials, they will pester their families to buy such unhealthy products to please their desires. Processed food has long been known as lack of nutrients and containing much fat, which might cause obesity among children. If they consumed such unhealthy product regularly, it would take a toll on children’s later development and their physical health.
On the other hand, had advertising aimed at children been banned, it would have badly affected an entire economy since advertisement plays a key role in promoting the development of a country. Many companies will suffer from a decrease in sales and profits, which would eventually lead to a rise in unemployment rates and the economy. For instance, KFC enterprise creates millions of job opportunities in advertising throughout the globe. If bans were to be placed upon commercials, a myriad of workers such as marketers may become jobless, and as a result, governments have to use financial resources to support those unemployed people
In conclusion, though advertising targeting children may have some negative influences on children's development and wellbeing, it seems to be implausible to ban advertisement in overall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67857142857 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20537654192 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.8735166417 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.545454545 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356773658111 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123402780944 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964472730296 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231678606396 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659495249191 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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