There are more and more parents working full time. Some people argue the childcare centres are the best in taking care of young children. Others think grandparents are better carers. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
For some people, childcare institutions would be the most appropriate solution for parents having full-time jobs to leave their kids there. Meanwhile, others assumed that children would have better education and care from their grandparents. Personally, it is obvious to me that families these days should send their kids to childcare centres.
On the one hand, there is an undeniable fact that children would experience an advanced care service at institutions such as kindergartens. First, trained nursemaid in these centres could educate and look after kids in scientific ways. For example, Vietnamese parents have a common conception of feeding their kids as much as they can. By sending children to kindergartens, their kids would follow a healthy diet and they could obviously take suitable nutrition amount into their bodies. In addition, children could have more friends in childcare centres. Consequently, they could effectively enhance their social skills such as communication, attitude comprehension, etc.
On the other hand, it is obvious that children would acquire education and emotional experience when they live with their grandparents. Clearly, elderly people are also family members, so kids will feel more closerly and comfortably if they are taken care of by their grandparents. Moreover, with experience and love, aged people could ensure both physical and emotional development for their grandchildrens. Last but not least, senior members in families would look after few numbers of kids, compared to childcare centres. Therefore, they could follow and sense their children’s development closely and keenly, even the most sophisticated changes could be easily detected.
In conclusion, from my personal belief, I am certain that childcare centres would be the most appropriate solution for people in the modern life these days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61565836299 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95042905318 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8833724045 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148385587605 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583937517459 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425692913806 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985711676311 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257705965962 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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