There are more workers who work from home and more students who study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Thanks to technological advances, in recent years the numbers of people working and studying from home has increasingly increased. Though this trend has some negative effects, I personally believe that this is a positive development.
On the one hand, there are several problems originating when individuals decide to work or study from their place. In terms of home working, there is a lack of direct interaction between employees and less supervision from managers, which may demotivate workers from their main tasks. Consequently, the labor productivity may go down and have a total negative influence on the whole company. Regarding the type of online learning, there is also a lack of face to face communication as well as competition amongst members in the class. This would lead to a dramatic decrease in the quality of training sessions.
However, I would argue that the above development is extremely positive. Firstly, individual has more opportunities to make money without having to spend a considerable amount of time on travelling to work. For instance, one person can carry out e-commerce at home by marketing and selling goods on the internet, which may enable them to gain huge profits. In addition, if employers allow their workers to work at home, they may not only create a flexible and creative workforce but remarkably reduce the company’s budget on the running cost such as electricity and infrastructure, etc. Turning to e-learning methods, students nowadays could save a great amount of time and money to pay for the training Institute and achieve the same educational purpose since these days universities have continuously enhanced their e-training qualification.
In conclusion, despite the fact that working or studying from home has both bright and dark sides, I believe that it is a positive tendency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33447098976 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05622204552 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638225255973 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2506476277 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.230769231 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244902629717 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740490035664 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564522271781 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148964197199 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035895474663 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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