There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, there are a number of main factors that encourage citizens to work on a daily basis, however, most people work hard because of money, which plays a vital role in human life. From my perspective, I partly disagree with this statement, in addition to money, people also make an effort to work in many areas.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people continue to work because of money. One explanation for this trend could be that living in the development of society, the cost of living is more expensive. In fact, If adults do not have money to pay for rent or electricity bills as well as food, which leads them to suffer from numerous mental statuses, such as stress or pressure, it would reduce their living standards, and worse, they would become homeless. In addition, having handsome salaries, they could savor their life better and they could travel across the world after a long day of work. Moreover, their kids would attend a higher education system, contributing to strong family relationships.
On the other hand, I believe that there is an abundance of reasons that motivate people to stay in the workplace. In the first place, modern views have broken the barriers, today more and more workers labor hard because it can satisfy their ambition. To take my dad as a demonstration, when he was a little boy, he had a big dream to become an engineer and after he graduated the university, he took up finding a suitable job related to his major and he has been with a job ever since.
To sum up, I reiterate that although money is an indispensable part of their life, people still work with almost their effort to carry out their dream and offer the company a more developed
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67326732673 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50468741145 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7774959892 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138482763255 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594557922376 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678121056694 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794698404866 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442088180633 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67326732673 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50468741145 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7774959892 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138482763255 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594557922376 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678121056694 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794698404866 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442088180633 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.