There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Following the development of society, every single person has a job as it gives them purposes to life. Although earning money is the main reason for people to keep working, many people stay in the workforce because of other motivation. As the essay dives deeper into the topic, several factors which encourage people to work will be mentioned.
First and foremost, it is obvious that there is a great number of dangerous occupations, for instance, firefighter or police. As a result, in order to pursue such jobs, people are ought to have passion. Since it is the type of work they enjoy doing, fear is no longer the concern. In addition, as respect is highly necessary in the day-to-day interaction, having an employment is quite essential. People tend to respect someone who has a stable occupation. Moreover, working is a great opportunity for studying, socializing and making beneficial relationship.
Nonetheless, the world where human lives is materialistic, therefore, money is one of the most crucial factors. Most people work hard because they can receive a better salary to earn a living. Not only can they possess a reliable source of income, they can also have happiness thanks to the great amount of money. In many cases, poor people are forced to labor in order to feed and take care of their family regardless of the employment
In conclusion, passion and being respected is the motivation of those who are likely to work in a difficult occupation while for most human being money is the major reason why they stay in the workforce.
- Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time doing physical activities 61
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time doing physical activities 61
- Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems 84
- Religion should be taught in public schools Discuss this statement giving reasons and examples to support your opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92748091603 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76580645256 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8453197351 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186366986852 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558056467926 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622820781675 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115725915924 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678440664744 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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