There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that a great deal of driving force is required to sustain someone in the workforce. Of them, monetary reasons holds a vital place and this cannot be vetoed.
People tend to continue their current job, in spite of utmost contempt they hold towards the same. Many points the steady salary, health benefits and retirement benefits that an establishment provides as the reason behind this. It is obvious that there has been growing workplace stress and psychological disturbances in people making their living through standard employments. We can see people around us getting excited on Friday nights and extremely depressed on Sunday nights. Workplace overloads, declining work-life balance and undesirable workplace culture are contributing towards it. Yet, they are reluctant in leaving their jobs so as not to leave out the remunerations.
On the other hand, we can also see passionate people working for their organisation desperately, even when they have an option to resign. Their motivation lies on the love towards the nature of the job or the team they dwell in. Such people find their job amusing as they are driven by a goal or dream. There are also a set of people who leave their job with high salary to a much lower designation on account of learning and exploring. Their retention cannot be ensured only on financial basis. In such scenarios, money do not have a game changing position.
In all these cases, there are some which align with the given statement and there are others which do not. Perceiving it as a whole, people who are unhappy with their jobs but are compelled to continue the same to live their lives occupy most of the mankind. this makes the statement ubiquitous and agreeable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...their lives occupy most of the mankind. this makes the statement ubiquitous and agre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96551724138 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64726992389 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6161637206 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7058823529 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084915666766 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276874593795 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227104710423 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049976405542 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153060264128 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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