Over the past few decades, the decline of houses in urban areas has been a major concern, because the pricely land caused serious problems in society. Although some people claim that only bureaucracy can deal with this issue, in my opinion with a combination of both the authorities and the individual, this problem can be tackled as I will discuss in the following essay.
There is no doubt that government has the power to establish legislation and subsidies. For example, governments will find real estate agencies, if they overcharge the price to live in the city. Therefore, real estate agencies would provide a reasonable price for sale. Furthermore, the government can provide financial support to the folks who are planning to purchase their own residence. A good example of this is , that the Taiwan government shares a proportion of money to subsidies people who buy housing in the urban area. As a result, citizens can alleviate the financial burden.
On the other hand, individuals also need to take action in order to deal with this issue.Instead of private townhouses in the urban areas, the crowd should try to find vertical apartments. For example, In Singapore, the majority of communities tend to live in high-rise buildings, so that more people can be accommodated in the city. In fact, this generates a lot of revenue for the government and creates numerous opportunities for people from the vicinity.
In conclusion, despite the fact that bureaucracy takes more responsibility, I believe a combination of government and individuals should be coordinated to solve the problem.
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also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18076923077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00637647285 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1979436772 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131883546777 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482175631753 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299321772636 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837359117144 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308977079827 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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