There are so many challenges and difficulties Vietnamese people are facing with social distancing and lockdown at the fourth time of the Coronavirus Outbreak Write about 250 words to discuss this problem

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There are so many challenges and difficulties Vietnamese people are facing with social distancing and lockdown at the fourth time of the Coronavirus Outbreak. Write about 250 words to discuss this problem.

The fourth outbreak of Covid-19 is the most serious in Vietnam. It has made the National Steering Committee for the Covid-19 epidemic prevention order social distance in regions, which has caused many problems and challenges. This essay will discuss two of the difficulties the Vietnamese have been facing up.
To begin with, the pandemic has some significant changes to people's life. According to Vietnam's General Statistics Office, because of the closedown of many companies, the unemployment rate has remarkably gone up in the first half of 2021. As a consequence, the unemployed has to rely on the government's subsidies.Furthermore, a mass number of community spreading cases have caused panic in the community. However the negative effects of society, the government is taking good measures to deal with it until now.
Secondly, the health system is confronting various challenges. At the center of the pandemic, Bac Giang province, there is a shortage of human resources in contact tracing and sampling for testing. This is the results of countless F1, who need to be quarantined and have Covid-19 test at least three times. Other provinces have had to send hundreds of doctors and nurses along with much equipment and necessities to Bac Giang to support disease prevention. With the support of the whole country, Bac Giang province is resolutely repelling the pandemic.
To conclude, Vietnam is suffering a hard time, but I believe that we will all get by with the unity and faith in government by the people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, at least, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18292682927 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01718314719 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642276422764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4736969705 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183475012172 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552891459186 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535133155632 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997378415339 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710340912279 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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