When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, when it comes to occupation choice, people tend to concern more about salary than before. The importance of money nowadays is undeniable however, when considering a job, other factors should also be taken into account. On the one hand, people need money to meet their basic needs. The salary has significant effects on our living standards. Things we use every day are exchanged with money. Without money, it is hard to imagine how to survive in this modern society. On the other hand, a group of people considers other aspects of a job outbalance the salary. They evaluate their preference for a position through the workplace's atmosphere, employee and leader relationship, etc. In addition, there is a part of the community that works to make value for society, not for money. In conclusion, I believe that not only salary but also other elements should be taken into consideration when choosing a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 637, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workplaces'' or 'workplace's'?
Suggestion: workplaces'; workplace's
...r preference for a position through the workplaces atmosphere, employee and leader relatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94838709677 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68278514015 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683870967742 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4364720764 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.7 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144869772994 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521969829029 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686713215571 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144869772994 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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