The coronavirus pandemic has pushed many shoppers in Vietnam to make their purchases online as many stores are either closed due to lockdown measures or have limited capacities to maintain social distancing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping during this pandemic period?
In the perspective of the Covid-19 pandemic, many areas have to be lockdown which leads to many changes in society. People's shopping method is among the most obvious changes as they have to buy things online instead of at shops. This essay will discuss two aspects of online shopping.
On the one hand, shopping online has some advantages. First of all, it helps maintain social distance. People can easily order a thing from the e-commerce platforms such as Shopee, Tiki, and then, the products will be shipped directly to the registered address. As a result, we can minimize close contact with others. Secondly, we can do our shopping in privacy. The sellers have to pack our items carefully inbox or at least in plastic bags so that the others cannot know what we buy.
On the other hand, the online shopping brings certain drawbacks. To begin with, it has some negative effects on the environment. As a general rule, our orders are packed in several layers of shockproof wraps and inside the oversized cardboard boxes. While the shockproof wrap is difficult to decompose, the production of cardboard boxes needs to cut down many trees that may cause deforestation. Another problem with this shopping method is that people waste time on it. We spend a lot of time scrolling, adding items into the cart. We also use the smartphone or laptop all around the clock to collect the vouchers not only at the sale events but almost every day.
To conclude, shopping online has both pros and cons. If we can balance its both side, it will be a good alternative mean of shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, at least, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78021978022 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49325997747 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4013973412 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105408142359 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324696272898 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406574593031 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663327177871 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486822337818 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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