There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
It is indisputable truth that in this digitalized world mobile phones are part and parcel of everyone's life. Owing to which, it is always highly debatable question that usage of technological gadget, there are some medical, social and technical issue occurred. I tend to deem that usage of mobile phones outnumber the ill-impact of it. I will discuss about pros and cons of the mobile phone.
In the inception, there are ample benefits of using mobile phones. The predominant advantage is connected with family members. To be more precise, with the help of mobile phone, we can easily talk or communicate with our near and dear ones either they live in a same city or live in other country. For instance, nowadays those students who live in a foreign nation for their study purpose and they can easily communicate with their kith and kin with the help of messages, video call and so many applications.
Secondly, lots of problems we face in our day to day life regarding medical or technical but we could get every solution by phone because in this era of 21st century, we can find any solution on online instead of asking someone.
On the contrary, in spite of having many merits related to mobile phone, it has few demerits also. Initially, if people use more mobile phone then it create bad impact not only on their health but also on their social life. What is more, mobile phone release hidden rays which effect on our eyes as well as ears and also we spend most of the time in that type of gadget which may be destroyed our good relationship with others because we cannot spend more time with them.
To recapitulate, although overuse of mobile phone create bad impact on relation or health, according to me, it has helpful in terms of connecting with family member, getting every solution regarding any problem and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, as well as, in spite of, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73208722741 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45684800794 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576323987539 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0872433839 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303878410956 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11614272431 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043990405922 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1600774096 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378805442953 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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