The issue of temperatures of the Earth becoming warmed rapidly due to man-made activities has aroused waves of controversies over the recent time. This essay will address some of the primary causes, in order that sensible solutions will be put forward.
It is undeniable that there are two key causes bringing negative effects on global temperatures around the world. One of the underlying causes is cutting down worldwide trees. In light of making way for buildings and accomodation, a great deal of trees are cut down with high speed, leading to countless number of forests around the world are destroyed formidably. For example, Vietnam used to have wealthy resources because of beautiful seas and a huge number of forests full of trees and animals, however, nearly all of them are devastated with the purpose of constructing more architectures for national thriving. As a result, global warming is increasing dramatically due to the lack of green lungs called forests. Another factor is strongly associated with the fact is the energy consumption of people. The living standards are enhanced significantly, people have to use power from electricity for serving their activities on a daily basis. This, in turn, contributes a large amount of power to global temperature which melts icebergs and heats the Earth by leaps and bounds.
Serious efforts should be taken to tackle this problem. One feasible solution is for governments who could appeal to individuals to preserve our remaining forests. In light of keeping a healthy world, authorities should boost environmental campaigns in an attempt not to heat global temperatures. Another remedy lies in hand of teachers who educate young generations to enhance awareness. Teachers should teach children and encourage their parents to save energy and switch to natural power with the aim of holding back the increased temperature around the globe. For instance, people could take full advantage of solar power to generate heat water without using electricity. This leads to a significant improvement for worldwide climate.
In conclusion, reasons to this problem are obvious and global warming is proven to be detrimental for humans. Solutions to this trouble should be taken urgently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...he recent time. This essay will address some of the primary causes, in order that sensible ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34084507042 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87874369213 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3911807171 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7894736842 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235260353718 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659440284934 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555342325034 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144884572278 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266552037668 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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