As the literacy rate is improving throughout the world, the number of students aiming to complete higher education are increasing. Many commentators are of the view that society reap the benefits if its population is highly educated; however, some argue that this trend adversely affects the education from qualitative perspective. Although there are many perks of having a pool of highly qualified idividuals; however, it is worth noting that it may have some drawbacks as well.
From an overall perspective, there are two key advantages of having an increased number of highly educated people. Perhaps the main advantage of university graduates is that the particular country has adequate supply of skilled labour locally which is not only cost efficient but it also saves unnecessary efforts in sourcing the workforce from overseas. For instance, Saudi Arabia spends billion dollars every year to recruit workers from foreign countries due to scarcity of qualified citizens. Furthermore, tertiary education offer several benefits on an individual level as university educated employees are well paid and enjoy a better wuality of life.
Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages of dramatic increase in the head count of graduates. Firstly, if a state's economy is going through a period of recession, there will be no vacancy in the job market to accomodate these people: further exacerbating the unemployment rate. Secondly, it may create imbalance in the job market as there will be an absence of workers to perform blue collar jobs.
To sum up, although having highly qualified population have several positive aspects but there is a dire need to control the number of students as it may create imbalance in society overall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36823104693 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83435578288 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602888086643 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.7673714728 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.181818182 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102999449852 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377270586025 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308943913665 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561225649387 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315570605556 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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