There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvement in people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is convinced that technology has developed rapidly and it leads many progresses to human world. Personaly, I definitely on the same way that the automation brings substantial things for human life.
In the one hand, it is a common necessary enhancement that the automation could fasilitate long distance communication. This aids many people such as families or friends to constantly connected while they settle in faraway point. For example, bit more people living in Bali would be easily to find out the condition of their partner who locate in Bandung by their smartphone. Surely, it would create some people permanently closer with their relatives regardless of space and time. In short, the automation as well as smartphone could be simplify people’s lives.
Even so, there are some non-essential things to not in line which the primer advancement machinery could establish human civilization. Firstly, a few people could get stuck in less convenient times while the tool has been invented wich make it simpler. It is due to something created to help human occupation more straightforward. For instance, some people still drive away to bank for dispatch their money whereas Automated Teller Machine (ATM) is available in many places. Therefore, making ATM card would be simplify people’s business that related to their finances. In other word, technology assist every single person to ease their finance business. Secondly, people who could not utilize the automation well would sense affliction in learning. It is because, in this era, machinery user could be easier to study anything in any platform. For the model, the office workers could expand their job in another subject as a chef from taking online cooking lessons so that they courses could be done in any time. As a result, high tech possess impact to ease of self-development.
To sum up where my track, mechanization progress is crucial aspect for human survival in this global time. Considerably person have more benefit from using it well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 976, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'course'
Suggestion: course
...ing online cooking lessons so that they courses could be done in any time. As a result,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, even so, for example, for instance, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19325153374 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82719096801 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1957101065 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1052631579 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911371945423 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290012768177 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197591424304 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542795443502 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196691967537 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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