There is an increasing in obesity in society
Nowadays, along with some leading causes inducing disease burden and death like diabetes or hypertension, the overweight condition is considered one of the worldwide alarming health concerns to people of all ages included children and adults. This essay will analyze in detail the two main risk factors relating to the obesity condition are food and lifestyle. Alternatively, this essay will also give some feasibility solutions to step by step resolve this health problem.
The first visible reason of overweight condition is that people tend to use harmful substances containing food rather than which are the organic resource as junk food, gas beverage. These days, because of busy working, adults have less time in preparing a heathy meal for themself or their families. In addition, with strong development in the food industry, more and more fast food companies, restaurants appear along with a wide range of designs, flavors, and extensive advertising strategies. This excessive consumption of calorie-rich products leads to accumulating fat tissue, eventually causing obesity. A solution is for the government to significantly increase taxes and limit advertisements on these unhealthy products. This could hopefully promote people to give up those foods and forward to consume healthier food.
The second leading cause of obesity is the sedentary lifestyle associated with the popularity of technological devices. That is to say, people spend too much time on watching TV, computers, or smartphones instead of other physical activity, less energy consumption results in higher fat accumulation to their bodies. Therefore, this can make their weight over control. The solution to this problem is that involves with organising more physical competitions in the community, take up some physical exercise every day. Parents and schools should monitor their children’s TV viewing time, going outdoors to play with them, and train them to pick up daily exercise habits.
To sum up, it is clear that obesity is increasing in both children and adults, due to unhealthy eating habits and lack of physical exercise that need to intervene urgent intervention.. In my opinion, governments, parents and schools all have a certain role to play in tackling this problem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48148148148 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90729259354 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621082621083 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7533003514 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0623222258485 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236145297745 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04279008315 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462526117486 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339168018008 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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