There is an increasing trend for people to live on their own and not share accommodation. What is causing this to happen? Do you think it will have a positive or negative effect on society?
Nowadays people are not concerned about those living around them. Here it is said that many choose to live privately in their own space without sharing it with others. In this essay I will try to list out the causes and will analyse the impact of such actions on this society.
Firstly, people are more concerned about their own safety. There are cases regarding the insecurity of the common public where anti-social elements are attacking others. they do not have any feeling of love or sympathy which can lead to a serious crime. Secondly, individuals are moving away from their families to urban areas in search of job. After which they chose to dwell with their family in a house which they purchase for their own. For an impeccable example, those living in urban areas are nuclear family who do not allow anyone else to live with them. As a result, more and more space is required to accommodate everyone in a community.
There are numerous negative effects due to not sharing the accommodation on the society. The members of a community not only hesitate to communicate with others but also feel unsecured to indulge in community activities. Moreover, individuals become selfish minded, so that, they don't find time to help others which is a indispensible act of humanity. As the children learn to be self-minded, the nation loses a good citizen. As a optimum example, a neighbour of mine, named Mobin, lives in a very small flat. He was in need of financial aid, but no one knew his situation. A month ago we found his body hanging from the ceiling fan in his own premises, which was a heart breaking incident. As a negative outcome, we might face difficulties which are beyond our control.
To sum up, though everyone is concerned about their own life, they must consider others too. In my opinion, we should help others in any way which we can.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54125533905 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590769230769 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.854690572 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.35 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207252732257 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559977348182 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549094993934 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122179033957 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741183084542 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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