There seems to be an inceasing number of serious crimes committed each year, while some thing the best way is to use the death penalty as a detorant, many people believe that other factors/measures will be needed.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In this changing word, due to advancement in technology and increase in population there indeed a rise in the number of serious crime for whole year. A section of society belives that the prominent way to deal with crime is to give death penalty as a punishment, while others believe that measures and factors need to be taken care for such crimes. I strongly believe that other factors should be taken into consideration before giving any harsh punishments, nevertheless, the discourse ahead will discuss both the view points before reaching to an appropriate conclusion.
To begin with, every country has its own crime dealing policies however, proper measures need to be taken care of before giving any punishments. Firstly of all, proper investigation needs to be done, so the main motive behind the crime gets highlighted and by doing so we can get the background for such crimes. Second of all, education should be given the main priority, which results in getting low crime rates, as most of the crimes done by illiterate individuals as they dont know after math of performed crimes. Moreover, it should be free so all gets the benefit from that which ultimately results in the future. To illustrate, as per recent survey the countries having high education rate has lower crime rate.
On the other hand, there is a section of society which opposes and considered to impose death penalties. Firstly, fear is the factor which takes place in the suspect by imposing such harsh law. By having fear of getting death penalty one might ends crime and move towards some usefull activities. For instance, in Arab Countries they have strict laws, if a person robbed someone then his/her hands get cut. Secondly, the person will think twice before doing crime due to the strict punishment which it has which ultimately results in low crime rates.
To conclude, there indeed are those in this society who seem to be convinced with the fact that harsh punishment is the only way to control crime rate and they assumingly have all the right reason to back their conviction. I, however, am of firm opinion that, alternate measures and factors should be considered not only education priority but also proper investigation for crimes need to be done before giving any harsh penalties.
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considered imposing'.
Suggestion: considered imposing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.953125 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57170918866 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528645833333 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9469150902 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277867404962 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948683517858 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733037101355 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183545082545 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929996709568 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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