These day it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.
It is true that today, there is an increasing population movement from the countryside to the big cities in search of work and excitement. Effects of this issue vary and essential solutions need to be adopted to tackle from its root cause.
First of all, rural depopulation has a detrimental impact mainly on the urban areas. As a result of overpopulation, many cities throughout the world are prone to environmental problems such as air, water, and noise pollution. Hence, a low quality of these sources may increase the risk of many fatal ailments such as lung cancer, throat cancer, and heart disease. In addition, the uncontrolled boom of citizens in overcrowded metropolises may lead to several serious social issues such as the high level of unemployment, and the increasing rate of crime. Consequently, these would be a restriction to improve the living standards of urban dwellers.
However, this problem is not intractable. The simplest measure is that government should bridge the disparity of facilities between rural and urban areas. It is undeniable that at the heart of the matter, people find services and infrastructure such as shopping centers, hospitals, and schools more readily available in the cities than in the countryside. Thus, raising the standard of community services might be necessary for every rural area to attract more inhabitants. Another solution to reverse the rural-urban migration would be for authorities to provide subsidies for business and professional workers. By this way, citizens would have more motivations to relocate to rural regions.
In conclusion, the tide of rural depopulation could not be stemmed in short term. Nevertheless, there are still effective methods to address the problem from its main cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, however, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34408602151 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04794404034 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9771752185 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218663981889 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703090251467 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470305056046 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123271236344 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269015629239 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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