Topic: Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend while others not.
What is your opinion on this?
It is true that the past 50 years have seen a substantial growth in the popularity of fast food. While it is of paramount importance to many people, especially people on a tight budget, I tend to argue that it has a more negative effect on people than positive one.
On the one hand, there are several advantages of this kind of junk food. Firstly, it is undeniable that fast food is a top choice for those who have a heavy workload. They usually do not have time to whip up their meals. Thus, it is more convenient for them to grab fast food and consume it during break time without investing much time in preparing ingredients. The second reason is that food such as hamburgers, fried chicken, and French fries are considered reasonably priced dishes for those living on breadline. Thanks to the advanced technology, fast food chain now can generate mass products more rapidly and inexpensive than manually cooking, which leads to the affordability for everyone.
On the other hand, I would argue that the above benefits are negated by a serious problem. The single issue is that fast food has a detrimental impact on our health. A vast amount of fat and salt used in producing fast food may be responsible for some fatal diseases such as high blood pressure, obesity, and diabetes. In spite of its positive influence on people's lifestyle, the cost and inconvenience of treating these ailments it causes to later life are significant. In other words, while fast food is beneficial in short time, its long-term effects are generally deleterious.
By the way of conclusion, I hold the view that fast food will become more popular as the pace of life. However, we should be aware of its disadvantages to have a more healthy diet.
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- Topic: Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend while others not.What is your opinion on this? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, thus, while, in short, kind of, such as, by the way, in other words, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76158940397 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69504692471 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5563944833 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195067942223 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638345814902 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423133067117 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11190387102 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202355067576 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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