These day young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning why is this happening what can be done young people to leave school with more positive towards learning
At the present day a myriad number of young people, abandon school studies with a negative bias regarding education what is the reason behind this and how to build up an optimistic attitude of teenagers towards education.
To begin with, these days education has become a business no one want to take it serious ways there are many reasons why the students are drooping from school with a bad attitude. The main reason behind this is teachers favouritism toward rich and brilliant student and this has become very inimical for education. Teaschers are more focus on the intelligent student instead of keeping more focus on weak who needs help in studies. Student were suffering lots of problems but they are not able to share with the teacher because of rude behaviour towards them. For example, if a teacher, again and again, to bring and point out to the weak student in front of another student it will directly affect on student's brain or behaviour and this will create a bad impact of students physical and mental health. Secondly, the student leaves school because of parental pressure. while choosing field after secondary examination parent does not take their children's dreaming serious way but alternately they compare their children with society, For example, A student who wants to make his career in the field of music is forced to study engineering just because parents want to make their childlike other people
On the other hand, to tackle this problem, firstly, teachers should be motivated to the weak student and help them in their academic work. schoolchildren
studies and also the principal of School should take strict action against teacher who done partiality among students .Secondly , parents counselling must be added during admission procedure and while selecting course students aptitude should be taken into consideration.
In conclusion, there are plethora of reason behind leaving school with negative attitude nut the main solution of all problem is motivate amd help to your child as much as possible and it will be done by only teachers and parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09037900875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53754261021 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577259475219 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.238650209 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.6 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240449505753 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107370849705 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690718232532 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136633085079 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752267550915 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.