In some country few people are with extremely high salary.some people think it is good for country while other believe government should limit their salaries.discuss both views and give your opinion.
Everyone wants to register the treasure of success in this contemporary world. Presently, in some of the nations a proportion of masses are earning highest level of revenue.at this extent some folks advocates that it will be considered as beneficial for rustic while others claims that authorities should give them average level of income by the way of salary. Here i would account for both the sides with my own prescription.
There are multifurious points to depict this phenomena.first and foremost,high revenue leads to more chances to pay tax which means it will be considered as helpful in raising the fund of administration in order to government will able to solve burning issues of our country. Therefore,our nation take step ahead toward development.moreover,the folks which are known as destitude segments of society they will be benefited by this approach. To demostrate,people who are earning astronomically they will try to fulfill the needs of them. By which downtrodden masses can get neccesities of life.
What is more, the persons with high yielding income are also at some point a cause of setting prestigious reputation of a bucolic. To illustrate,dhirubhai ambani is popular in business sector whereas sachin tendulkar in sports part and amitabh bachan in film industry and so on therefore, these are considered to be a pride of our countryfield.
On the contrary, others have conflicting views too.initially,more income of people plays a major role to increase the level of criminal activities such as theft, bugllary and so on by which all will be adversly effected.besides it,limited salary will offer us to reduce discrimination in the society and the root of equality start growing.
From my notion, both sides hold their valid grounds.so,we cannot entirely support or go against any of the side. But according to my perception each and every person should be given that much proportion of salary which he/she deserves.
To recapitulate,it is well said that money is not god but not less than god in this rampart age.so,administration should take proactive steps to venture its throny side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, such as, by the way, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25219941349 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45953813745 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618768328446 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8957070592 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.769230769 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131734239064 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420334175384 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040603539413 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614626887683 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419154008939 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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