These days many people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages.
The development of the economy has a significant impact on contemporary society. The modern lifestyle and hectic schedules encourage an increasing number of individuals to consume ready-to-eat meals. Although there are both positives and negatives of this trend, in my opinion, outside food has more negative effects than positive ones.
On the one hand, there are several advantages to eating ready-made food. One advantage is that it saves the consumer time because most fast foods take little or no time to prepare and serve when compared to home-cooked food. Moreover, many canned foods are cheaper in price, allowing a person to save a significant amount of money. For instance, steamed broken rice, a packaged meal in Vietnam is just more than twenty thousand dongs which are cheaper than the average cost of homemade food. Hence, a lot of students and staff offices chose outside food instead of homemade food. Therefore, the advantages of fast food are relatively cheap and as its name suggests, saving time.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks to this trend. One is that people who eat ready-made meals on a regular basis have a variety of health concerns. They contain high levels of preservatives and additives that can cause various diseases like cancer and kidney trouble. Also, fast food is full of calories and deficient in nutrients. If it is consumed on a regular basis, it will lead to obesity, diabetes, and heart trouble.
Taking everything into consideration, it is not hard to see that there are more disadvantages than advantages to the consumption of outside food. Ready-made food certainly makes our lives more comfortable by eliminating the need to cook. Unfortunately, it also makes us unhealthy with additives and preservatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1637630662 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8719130418 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620209059233 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9858097928 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1764705882 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367076140749 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10411328156 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789353495485 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197210307015 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814063818527 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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