Free-style: Someone I admire / An infuential person
In general, people may admire a celebrity, such as a musician or a actor... However, there is one person in particular whom I admire the most: my mother.
My family consists of four members, but my father is required to work during the day and my oldest brother must attend school. As a result, I always stayed at home with my mother when I was three years old. At the same time, she assumes three different roles. She is my mother, friend, and teacher all rolled into one. Thanks to her patient education, I could read at the age of three and made great strides on my learning path.
She is the most affectionate person I have ever encountered. She taught me the basic values of life and put a great effort to teach me to distinguish the right from wrong. I can remember many sleepless nights she spent looking after me when I was ill.
Time flies so fast, my mother at the age of fifty. She is still the first to listen to all of my problems and give me some useful advice. Thanks to her encouragement, I have overcome all my difficulties. She is the one who contributed the most to help me become the person I am. In brief, I am very proud of my mother. She is always the person who inspires me the most.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...mire a celebrity, such as a musician or a actor... However, there is one person i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, in brief, in general, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29130434783 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45998217216 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578260869565 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.480626988 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.6875 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0583871793913 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273940056826 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438550123026 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560589123142 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576938247405 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 13.0946893788 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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