These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to travelling.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of taravelling in a foreign country.
In our modern life, most people prefer to taravel to different type of countries taking significant periods of time out to travel abroad is becoming increasingly popular. However, to doing this can leads to some problems. Some people mostly find it great to travel with couples while I personally believe that, in abroad people come across culture shock, no enough knowledge about their language.
Let us begin by looking at the advantages of traveling to an abroad. One of the main positive of traveling overseas give a lot of opportunities to recharge energy without their work or study's problems. On the other hand most people especially like overseas' taditional foods and they are huge fan of their preparing food methods.
Another positive side is that, traveling abroad can extend horizon people's outlook. It can lead to rounded person and people can live good living qualifications in special hotels for tourists and they might improve their languages very well during practice with native speakers.
Turning to the other side of disadvantages are that, in addition by traveling abroad is becoming culture shock, this is major problem to people. Besides, people feel that sence of isolation and homesickness.
Another issue is that some people no enough knowledge about to know international or not international languages and, people find some difficulties about where is area that they want
All things considered, traveling abroad which in our modern life. I personally believe that, travelling's drawbacks in terms, finally outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, however, if, look, so, well, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36032388664 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75929866487 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3815871848 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173532225965 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641788578322 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541635009703 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836057423394 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434967092796 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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