These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
Moving to other countries for studying and living is a current trend, especially among young adults. Even though living abroad give people obviously enormous benefits, there are plenty of obstacles to overcome.
There are a large number of reasons for people to go living overseas. Firstly, destination countries are usually the more developed countries that can offer people a better life quality. These countries are either have an advanced education system, a great social security system or just simply a better job market. In the past, thousands of people from northern Vietnam have moved to Soviet Union countries for working and most of them returned to their homeland later with fortunes, some of them even chose to reside abroad for good. This is because their income in these countries was very high at that time and the currency rate could significantly increase the value of their money in Vietnam. In addition, living in other countries can help people extend their ability by giving them chances to gain better qualifications and language skills. People who live abroad can learn more new knowledge from their international friends who have different cultural backgrounds, which give them a broader outlook on life.
However, starting fresh in a strange country is definitely no plain sailing. First of all, the entrances to developed countries are tighten up due to the raising concerns about the terrorism and the immigration wave. The US government made some orders in the midyear of 2017 to tighten up the immigration policy, preventing citizens of some Muslim countries from entering the USA. Many other countries are also considering to close their border in order to reduce the number of immigrants. These changes had discouraged many young people who intended to find an international career opportunity or to pursue the academic path overseas. Even if they manage to get accepted from their desired country, there are more and more challenges waiting ahead such as the cultural shock, the language barrier, the racisms and other serious problems.
In conclusion, living in a foreign country is not just a challenging journey but also a life-changing opportunity for those who dare to take it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...of obstacles to overcome. There are a large number of reasons for people to go living oversea...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tightened'.
Suggestion: tightened
...he entrances to developed countries are tighten up due to the raising concerns about th...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering closing'.
Suggestion: considering closing
... the USA. Many other countries are also considering to close their border in order to reduce the num...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21508379888 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69553651547 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575418994413 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7896323651 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6875 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353060234183 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110303842143 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466889963487 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190092123726 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718890792046 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.