These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
education today plays very decisive role.dasy are gone when students have to pursue their further study in their own country.while, apparently, to study abroad becomes easier and convient.however, this development is beneficial or not.
the main benefit of this action to get chance to experience new different culture.the person will go to foreign meet new people and learn various languages and skill.this also help to improve person's presentation skill.the survey which was recently published by Oxford show that, mostly the student who studied overseas are more skillful than the person studied their native country.
there is an additional advantage of this development is people can get good and high quality of education which is not possible in some under develope nations.the country like Nepal and south africa has very low-level of education system. due to this, the growth of the country has not increased for couple years.
on the other side, if student go to foreign , the country will suffered from skillful youth source.some intelligent student have dreamed to visit and stay in other part of the world.so that time nation will lack in labour and skillful worker.developing countries like india,there is also large amount people for last 5 years migrating towards the foreign countries for their further study.
in conclusion,overseas study is very beneficial to some extent for flourish person's ability.but excessive amount of migration has harmful effect on that country's economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48927038627 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97827684299 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630901287554 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.605580307 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.166666667 106.682146367 200% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8333333333 20.7667163134 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201099009973 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948055439281 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040364892723 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997444677951 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486737238583 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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