These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
there are many views of people to go another nation either for a purpose of job or a study.There are immense benefit to go foreign but we could not forget the demerits of this advantage.
It is indeed true that nowadays people prefer to go another country for their further education or work I highlight the merits of that purpose.To begin with, the allured countries offers a variety of jobs and study benifits to student and also due to advancement in technology more and more student want to go another country.For instance, student of India prepare for ielts test to do study in foreign country and they try there best to pass that test because they know that there are many benifts if they go overseas for study.Firstly, they become selfdependent to do there work on time and also do job for there daily chores.Secondly, they enjoy the environment of another nation as well as the new cultural experience, which help them to gain knowledge about various cultures and traditions or the history of another country where they live for there holistic development.Lastly, in foreign countries the value of each work is equally which give the sansiation of equality among students and human being,so that students love to do job there.
one the other hand there are many disadvantages of these.Firstly, student start everything from beginning and the most important thing is that they leave their most important world i.e their family for their progress . Secondly, sometimes there are some circumstance arrive where they will find some help but no one help them.In these way they feel uncomfortable .
To conclude, I believe that advantages and disadvantages to go another country go hand in hand but advantages overcome the demerits of that situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00684931507 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90163766411 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 349.900214347 49.4020404114 708% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.4 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4 20.7667163134 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8 7.06120827912 323% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276297446322 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13773571745 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735368919842 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161552670235 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645024550217 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 13.0946893788 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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