These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
It is widely observed that many fathers are staying at home to look after their children while mothers take the role of the breadwinner. This phenomenon can be attributed to several factors, and I strongly believe that it is overall a positive development.
There are two main contributors to the increasing number of stay-at-home fathers. Chief of these is that women are currently presented with more opportunities to advance professionally than ever before, due to recent promotions of gender equality in the workplace. Given this positive change, a considerable proportion of women now work in lucrative jobs and earn much more money compared to their spouses, many of whom are willing to become househusbands to enable their wives to develop their careers. Added to this is the fact that traditional gender roles are being gradually eradicated as society continues to progress. To illustrate, most people are now supportive of men who do housework and take care of their offspring, rather than ridicule them like in the past. This movement has undoubtedly helped men to overcome insecurities about doing traditionally feminine activities and motivated them to become homemakers.
From my perspective, the emerging trend of househusbands is a fundamentally positive development. To begin with, couples with this dynamic tend to be mofd appreciative of each other, as they are deeply understanding of the opposite sex’s traditional struggles. Their children will also grow up learning about gender equality from parents who thoroughly respect and understand one another. In addition, this trend will certainly improve the relationship between fathers and their offspring. In a majority of traditional families, children have close-knit relationships with their mother, but are distant from their father, who tends to spend his time working rather than playing with them. However, studies have found that paternal bond is equally as vital and essential to children’s development as its maternal counterpart. Therefore, by staying at home, fathers can maintain an affectionate relationship with their children, thus contributing to their personal growth.
In summary, the rising number of male homemakers can be ascribed to the advancement of career opportunities for women and the erosion of patriarchal gender roles. It is my conviction that this development is a welcome one due to its tremendously positive influence on both couples and their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...tudies have found that paternal bond is equally as vital and essential to children’s devel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52506596306 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14751506874 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585751978892 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3834521058 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.176470588 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330887235153 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994161393517 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677004724028 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21019260326 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549353316274 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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